After reading your entry, I have some comments: - Your responsibitity is not just find out the example of bias as you did.The main work you have to do is INDENTIFY BIAS, so you have to show the message as well as analysis some rhetorical devices in your entry. - I think you should find the shorter exanple in item 2 & 3 to reader follow easier. Your items is so long, so I fell it difficult to catch the term of entry and indentify bias in it Hope that some comment above would help your entry better
thank for your comments, but i asked teacher for guides is that i just show what is bias in each item. it is ok. in terms of the length of the text,i know it is so long but the teacher ordered me to show original full text so i follow that. please, read the paragraph which i highlighted.
I agree with Hoa that you should analyze each item so that everybody understands the reason why the terms "stereotype, prejudice, assumption and scapegoating" best matches each of these items above. Besides, I think you should document the source of item 1 in much detail as possible.
- although you said that " i asked teacher for guides is that i just show what is bias in each item. it is ok",analyzing it to make it clearly is much better. not all can understand why this item includes that kind of bias, such as me.
After reading your entry, I have some comments:
Trả lờiXóa- Your responsibitity is not just find out the example of bias as you did.The main work you have to do is INDENTIFY BIAS, so you have to show the message as well as analysis some rhetorical devices in your entry.
- I think you should find the shorter exanple in item 2 & 3 to reader follow easier. Your items is so long, so I fell it difficult to catch the term of entry and indentify bias in it
Hope that some comment above would help your entry better
thank for your comments, but i asked teacher for guides is that i just show what is bias in each item. it is ok.
Xóain terms of the length of the text,i know it is so long but the teacher ordered me to show original full text so i follow that.
please, read the paragraph which i highlighted.
I agree with Hoa that you should analyze each item so that everybody understands the reason why the terms "stereotype, prejudice, assumption and scapegoating" best matches each of these items above. Besides, I think you should document the source of item 1 in much detail as possible.
Xóa- although you said that " i asked teacher for guides is that i just show what is bias in each item. it is ok",analyzing it to make it clearly is much better. not all can understand why this item includes that kind of bias, such as me.
Trả lờiXóa