Entry 1_ Hồ Thị Như
Item 1
Source: http://www.cartoonmovement.com/cartoon/7477
Rhetorical devices:
- Metaphor: In this
picture, the soldier represents war
the
death symbolizes death
That the soldier whistles to
the death and the good atmosphere between them refer to the strong connection
between war and death.
Message:
Death is an unavoidable
result of war. This result is war secret which eveyone can be aware of.
Item 2:
Rising // Rise
© SAGAR YADAV
I will rise
After every fall
I will rise
and stand even more tall
I will rise
over the wall
I will rise
above them all
Like the sun
which never dies
though sets every night
every day it does rise
Like the ocean
whose tides
many times they are down
but invariably they rise
Like the trees
from seeds they arise
and heights great
they rise and rise
After falling once,
twice and thrice
Again and again
I will rise and rise
I will rise
after every fall
After every fall
I will rise
After every fall
I will rise
and stand even more tall
I will rise
over the wall
I will rise
above them all
Like the sun
which never dies
though sets every night
every day it does rise
Like the ocean
whose tides
many times they are down
but invariably they rise
Like the trees
from seeds they arise
and heights great
they rise and rise
After falling once,
twice and thrice
Again and again
I will rise and rise
I will rise
after every fall
After every fall
I will rise
Source: http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/i-will-rise
Rhetorical devices:
- Repetition: repeating "
I will rise "
- Rhyme: fall - tall, wall -
all, die - night, tides - rise, thrice - rise.
- Simile: Like the sun, Like
the ocean, Like the trees.
- Antithesis: fall - rise, set
- rise ( the sun ), down - rise ( the tides ).
Message:
Life is never easy, therefore
all of us always have to struggle with difficulties as well as challenges which
make you tired and discouraged. Don't let those difficulties put you down and
try to rise after every fall.
Item 3:
One day, a poor boy who was selling goods from door to door
to pay his way through school, found he had only one thin dime left, and he was
hungry. He decided he would ask for a meal at the next house. However, he lost
his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. Instead of a meal he asked
for a drink of water. She thought he looked hungry so brought him a large glass
of milk. He drank it slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you?” “You
don’t owe me anything,” she replied. “Mother has taught us never to accept pay
for a kindness.” He said, “Then I thank you from my heart.”
As Howard Kelly left that house, he not only felt stronger
physically, but his faith in God and man was strong also. He had been ready to
give up and quit.
Year’s later that young woman became critically ill. The
local doctors were baffled. They finally sent her to the big city, where they
called in specialists to study her rare disease. Dr. Howard Kelly was called in
for the consultation. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a
strange light filled his eyes. Immediately he rose and went down the hall of
the hospital to her room. Dressed in his doctor’s gown he went in to see her.
He recognized her at once. He went back to the consultation room determined to
do his best to save her life. From that day he gave special attention to the
case.
After a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr. Kelly
requested the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He
looked at it, then wrote something on the edge and the bill was sent to her
room. She feared to open it, for she was sure it would take the rest of her
life to pay for it all. Finally she looked, and something caught her attention
on the side of the bill. She began to read the following words:
“Paid in full with one glass of milk”
Signed, Dr. Howard Kelly.
Source: http://academictips.org/blogs/a-glass-of-milk-paid-in-full/
Rhetorical devices:
- Climax:
+ They finally sent her
to the big city, where they called in specialists to study her rare disease. Dr.
Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation. When he heard the name of the
town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes.
+ Dr. Kelly requested the business office to pass the
final bill to him for approval. He looked at it, then wrote something on the
edge and the bill was sent to her room.
- Parallelism
+ One day, a poor boy who was selling goods from door
to door to pay his way through school, found he had only one thin dime left,
and he was hungry.
+ He looked at it, then wrote something on the edge and
the bill was sent to her room.
Message:
The story is a true reflection of the proverb " One
good turn deserves another ". All acts of kindness come back to you,
some way, some how so don't hestitate to help other people if possible.
1. Item 1: I think symbol device is used in this pictute instead of metaphor device
Trả lờiXóa2. Item 2: In my opinion, the message should concentrate more about rising after fall rather than difficulties or challenges.
I like your poem and story. those are really great lessons for us.
- I do agree with the message that you give in the cartoon. From what I can see, there is a connection between the war and the death, I think metaphor is using here; they are like close friends when talking and laughing with each other. But there also has symbol using here when you show that the soldier indicates the war, and the skull refers to the death. That’s why I think the cartoon aims at warning people about the bad effect of war to human life, as war can kill many people.
Trả lờiXóa- In the 2nd item, I have the same idea with you for all the rhetorical devices you have given. However, I do think that this poem wants to encourage us to have the attempt to overcome any troubles in our lives to grow up.
- I like your story very much. It’s such a touching lesson
Good luck for you presentation tomorrow. I hope my comments somehow help you ^^
I don't quite understand the message in item 1. In my opinion, you should specify the message more.
Trả lờiXóaItem 2 i think the lesson is never give up no matter what life does to you.
I really like your story in item 3 and the message is pretty clear,too.
- Item 1:I agree with Thuong in your cartoon that: the cartoon emphasizes warning people about the consequense of war. So your message should focus on it
Trả lờiXóa- You have a meaning story, i quite like it
Trả lờiXóahi Như I have somwe comments for U :). first I like your meaning story in item3; however maybe you had a mistake in item 1 .the Rhetorical device here is symbol, not metaphor. It is obvious that the death symbolizes death. :). In the message, i agree with You that war is always enclosed with the death.however, You should follow Hoa's cmt :)
about message in Item2, I have another opion : time and failure make human being become more grow and mature.