Thứ Hai, 18 tháng 2, 2013

Entry 1_ Nguyễn Mạnh Cường


Item 1 :

·         Rhetorical devices
Metaphor
·         Analysis
Human being is ruining our own and only planet by any means that satisfy our needs. One of those is the need of beauty and entertainment. In this picture, we have seen a skinned – woft, being angry and walked a way with a fur coat in his hand after he had knocked out the rich woman ( who definitely paid a lot of money to purchase her clothes ). The inspiration idea is the pay- back of mother nature to human being after all we have done. The message from the artist is short : “Protect the environment, stop killing animals for fur or other product or you‘ll pay the price “
·         Source of image:  http://9gag.com/gag/6597293


Item 2 :
                           The Fox and The Crow
A Fox once saw a Crow fly off with a piece of cheese in its beak and settle on a branch of a tree.
     "That's for me, as I am a Fox," said Master Reynard, and he walked up to the foot of the tree.
     "Good day, Mistress Crow," he cried. "How well you are looking today: how glossy your feathers; how bright your eye. I feel sure your voice must surpass that of other birds, just as your figure does; let me hear but one song from you that I may greet you as the Queen of Birds."
     The Crow lifted up her head and began to caw her best, but the moment she opened her mouth the piece of cheese fell to the ground, only to be snapped up by Master Fox.
     "That will do," said he. "That was all I wanted. In exchange for your cheese I will give you a piece of advice for the future: "Do not trust flatterers."
Author: Aesop

Analysis:

In my opinion,there are two rhetorical devices  employed in 

this story as follows:

- Metaphor: First, the artist has personalized the animals ( a fox and a crow ) and turn them into the living characters. This will make a good influence to the audience and specially the young children. Second, the smart Master Fox represent a part of our social which living and profiting by their “smoothly speak” and calculating minds. On the other hand, the Crow represents the part of people ( mostly included by the rich and bosses ) who’d love to hear flattery words and have no idea who they are.
- Parallelism: That can be seen in such sentences as: “How well you are looking today: how glossy your feathers; how bright your eye” to add rhyme.


Item 3:
The Road Not Taken



TWO roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;


Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,


And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.


I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.


Author: Robert Frost (1874–1963).

·        Rhetorical devices :
          Repetition: And ( 5 times )
·         Terminal thyme:  
         wood – stood – could , fair – wear – there, claim –   same, lay – day – way, black – back, sigh- I – by
·         Analysis:
A story of a day turn to a meaning of life. There are some occasion in our life, we would have to face two or more option and have to make a decision. By any cost, our decisions define who we are and none of these decisions should be taken again.
        

3 nhận xét:

  1. - In the first item, can you make it more specific: where is metaphor used?
    - I think the story is very interesting but as Long wrote, the message is too obvious. we need a story that make us think after reading to be aware of its message.

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  2. Do you forget to give message at the item 2 and 3 ?
    Item 1:Instead of analyse the meaning of cartoon in detail, you can list some rhetorical devices such as:
    - The fur indicates the natural resource exploited by human
    - The fox refers to revenge of natural
    - The women knocked out that is the consequence human being is suffered
    I hope some my advices can help your entry better :)

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  3. * The picture is so interesting :)However, you should analys rhetorical devices used in in this picture, should you?
    * I have ever read the story "The fox and The crow" some times. That's an irony story. Why did you show it to us?
    * And you forgetted to give the message for the story and the poem, did you? :)
    Your poem make me think about a sentence of my mother: "Each of us has only a pair of leg, therefore you can only go in one way" :)

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