Thứ Hai, 18 tháng 2, 2013

Entry 1 Đặng Thu Hà




Item 1: Poem

A dream deferred

By Langston Hughes

What happens to a dream deferred?
Does it dry up
like a raisin in the sun?
Or fester like a sore--
And then run?
Does it stink like rotten meat?
Or crust and sugar over--
like a syrupy sweet?
Maybe it just sags
like a heavy load.
Or does it explode?
 Rhetorical devices:
1. Rhetorical questions: "What happens to a dream deferred?", "Does it dry up like a raisin in the sun?""Or fester like a sore and then run?", etc.
2. Simile:  "like a raisin", "like a sore", "like rotten meat", "like a syrupy sweet", "like a heavy load"
3. Climax: from "dry up" to "fester", "stink", "crust", "sag", to "explode" --> an increase in the power of the verbs.
4. Continual repetition of the structure " Does it" and "Or", like vigorous questions that never end in the author's mind.
5. Rhymes: sun - run, meat - sweet, load - explode

Source:   http://www.cswnet.com/~menamc/langston.htm
Messages:  A dream, though deferred, can never die. It will not dry out, nor it will fester, stink or crust in the heart of the dreamer. A deferred dream, instead, will finally bust out, or "explode". In short, the author wants to tell us: always believe in your dreams, although they may seem impossible for the time being, or temporarily delayed.
Item 2: Story
Old Behrman was a painter who lived on the ground floor beneath them. He was past sixty and had a Michael Angelo's Moses beard curling down from the head of a satyr along with the body of an imp. Behrman was a failure in art. Forty years he had wielded the brush without getting near enough to touch the hem of his Mistress's robe. He had been always about to paint a masterpiece, but had never yet begun it. For several years he had painted nothing except now and then a daub in the line of commerce or advertising. He earned a little by serving as a model to those young artists in the colony who could not pay the price of a professional. He drank gin to excess, and still talked of his coming masterpiece. For the rest he was a fierce little old man, who scoffed terribly at softness in any one, and who regarded himself as especial mastiff-in-waiting to protect the two young artists in the studio above.
Rhetorical devices:
1. Symbols:
to wield the brush: to draw or to work as an artist
to touch the hem of his Mistress's robe: to reach the pinnacle of his success
2. Metaphor:
 a failure in art: someone who cannot success in art
Message:  Old Behrman was an artist who always wanted to succeed in his career but could never make it

Source: http://www.online-literature.com/donne/1303/
Item 3: Cartoon











Rhetorical device: 
Paradox: there can never be more wars than jobs, thus it is illogical that finding a war is easier than a job
Irony: nowadays, there have been so many wars and conflicts, while the unemployment rate is increasing, thus being a soldier is much better off than a scholar.
Message: The world is in a crisis. We are making so many wars, while the economy has not recovered.

Source: http://www.google.com.vn/url?sa=i&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=images&cd=&cad=rja&docid=eSeangZdMszWKM&tbnid=jcKzvIKBrZIQbM:&ved=0CAQQjB0&url=http%3A%2F%2Fraquelgfernandez.blogspot.com%2F2012%2F02%2Fpolitical-cartoons.html&ei=toYiUZ_gKOXUigerwICwCg&bvm=bv.42553238,d.aGc&psig=AFQjCNHEG3wq-Gky3If-J8biz4EGJMU-Pg&ust=1361303602966483

4 nhận xét:

  1. Nhận xét này đã bị tác giả xóa.

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  2. - The poem is really interesting. What I can see is that it teaches us not to give up and always believe in ours dream. What we haven’t achieved yet does not mean that we can not achieve it, it is just the delay. You have realized many rhetorical devices, that is good. However, in your message, I think you should shorten it just by showing: “always believe in your dreams, although they may seem impossible for the time being, or temporarily delayed”, the very first part of the message is the explanation or the detail, do not include it in your message.

    - About the story: I think it is not a full version of the story, as you have just shown the short excerpt of it. I think the message sounds weird. You had better choose another full story that can transfer a complete message. It is just my opinion :)

    - I agree with your third item.

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  3. * I quite like your first item and third item.
    * However, I found something unclear in your second item. For details:
    - Fisrtly, in rhetorical devices, I don't think it is metaphor. I guess you have some confusion here. You had better to review your post. "failure in art" is just a idiom :)
    - Secondly, I agree with Thuong that your passage you chosen seem not to be full, therefore it is difficult for us to see thorough the passage.
    - One more thing, in my opinion, your message is not meaningful very much. It just likes a summary of the story.
    That's all of my opinion. I hope it's heplful for you :)

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  4. I think item 3 has one more rhetorical device: simile (war and job),and i agree with you about the message!
    that's my suggestion!

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