Thứ Hai, 18 tháng 2, 2013

Entry 1_Nguyễn Tuấn Anh

ITEM 1: Cartoon




Analysis: The picture reflects the real situation of our education: The government encourages more education without considering the future of the student. And consequently, too many student graduate from too many universities but they are still out of work.

Message: If the government wants to radically change society and much less eliminate capitalism, they should consider applying appropriate policies to make the education more effective.

ITEM 2: Story
Flies
A woman walked into the kitchen to find her husband walking around with a fly swatter.
"What are you doing?" she asked.
"Hunting flies," He responded.
"Oh, killing any?" She asked.
"Yep, three males, two females," he replied.
Intrigued, she asked, "How can you tell?"
He responded, "Three were on a beer can, two were on the phone."


Rhetorical devices:
- Metaphor: “Three flies on the beer can” – three male flies refer to men whose beer is their favorite drink.
“Two flies on the phone” – two female flies refer to women who love chatting on the phone.

Message: In this situation, perhaps the husband wants to warn his wife that she should stop using the telephone for a long time.

ITEM 3: Poem
If love is about the chase,
I would have run thousands of miles on end
If love is all about the hiding and seeking,
I would have lost count on where to seek
If love is all about playing the games, I would have been a master at it
If love is all about reading between the lines,
I would have given up trying

Yet, love comes when you least expected
While it throws you over the edge at times,
We still cling onto our expectations
Hoping that special someone will cross our path someday
                                                                -Charmed attic-


Rhetorical Devices:
- Repetition: “If love is all about” – 3 times, “I would” – 3 times.
- Comparison: “Love” as “the chase”, “the hiding and seeking”, “playing the games”, “reading between the lines”

Message: Love is about giving and receiving and love needs patience never give up your dream then love will come to you someday.




10 nhận xét:

  1. The picture reflects the real situation of our education: The government encourages more education without considering the future of the student. And consequently, too many student graduate from too many universities but they are still out of work.

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  2. Thanks for your comment, I will reconsider this point.

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  3. Nhận xét này đã bị tác giả xóa.

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  4. I totally agree with Long that you should denote the rhetorical devices in the picture. In the second item, in my point of view, the message of the story should be about the stereotype of men and women that are men addict to alcohol and women love gossiping.

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    1. Your comment will be a good contribution to my entry. Thank you.

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  5. your story is very funny, and the rhetorical devices here is metaphor, quite clear but you should make sure about the message you show, actually you should not use the word " perhaps"

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    1. Yeah, the use of "perhaps" here is quite inadequate. Thank you for your notice, I will try to make correction to this.

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  6. about the picture i didn't see "eliminate capitalism" as you mention. do you guess that from your experience

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    1. Oh, I mean that the government encourages education and this includes the purposes to eliminate the capitalism. But the main point I want to mention here is that the way they carry out their policy. It's ineffective and has no clear vision for the future. Have you got my point?

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