Thứ Hai, 18 tháng 2, 2013

Entry 1_ Vu Thi Lan Anh


Item 1: Cartoon




+ Rhetorical devices:


  Pun: “warm–up” vs “burning”
     Irony + Overstatement: a warm-up activity produces fire to burn cheaters.

+ Message:
          
        A funny cartoon demonstrates the humorous use of a combination of words (warm-up). Besides, it also warns cheaters of cheating.


                             Item 2: Poem

Friends


By Abbie Farwell Brown


How good to lie a little while
And look up through the tree!
The Sky is like a kind big smile
Bent sweetly over me.

The Sunshine flickers through the lace
Of leaves above my head,
And kisses me upon the face
Like Mother, before bed.

The Wind comes stealing o'er the grass
To whisper pretty things;
And though I cannot see him pass,
I feel his careful wings.

So many gentle Friends are near
Whom one can scarcely see,
A child should never feel a fear,
Wherever he may be.


+   Rhetorical devices:

           - Simile :  “Sky” vs “kind big smile”
                          “Sunshine” vs “my mother”
         - Rhyme :     “while – smile” , “free - me”, “lace – face”,        head – bed”,
                          “grass – pass”, “things – wings”, “near – fear”, “see – be”
      
Message :
          A child should not feel a fear because his/her friends are everywhere.


                             Item 3: Story 


Be Happy Now!

  by Alfred D. Souza

We convince ourselves that life will be better after we get married, have a baby, then another. Then we're frustrated that the kids aren't old enough and we'll be more content when they are. After that, we're frustrated that we have teenagers to deal with. We'll certainly be happy when they're out of that stage.
We tell ourselves that our life will be complete when our spouse gets his or her act together, when we get a nicer car, are able to go on a nice vacation, when we retire. The truth is, there's no better time to be happy than right now. If not now, when?

Your life will always be filled with challenges. It's best to admit this to yourself and decide to be happy anyway. One of my favorite quotes comes from Alfred D. Souza. He said, "For a long time it had seemed to me that life was about to begin - real life. But there was always some obstacle in the way, something to be gotten through first, some unfinished business, time still to be served, or a debt to be paid. Then life would begin. At last it dawned on me that these obstacles were my life."

This perspective has helped me to see that there is no way to happiness. Happiness is the way. So, treasure every moment that you have and treasure it more because you shared it with someone special, special enough to spend your time with... and remember that time waits for no one.

So, stop waiting ... until you finish school, until you go back to school, until you lose ten pounds, until you gain ten pounds, until you have kids, until your kids leave the house, until you start work, until you retire, until you get married, until you get divorced, until Friday night, until Sunday morning, until you get a new car or home, until your car or home is paid off, until spring, until summer, until fall, until winter, until you're off welfare, until the first or fifteenth, until your song comes on, until you've had a drink, until you've sobered up, until you die, until you're born again to decide that.

There is no better time than right now to be happy!

+ Rhetorical devices:

-   A rhetorical question:  “If not now, when?” ( line 6 )
-   Simile : “happiness” – “the way”
-   Climax : from “until you finish school” to “ decide that”

+ Message:
  
                    Be happy every single moment because time waits for no one.






Sources

Item 2: http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/famous/poem/friends-by-abbie-farwell-brown
Item 3: http://www.inspirationalstories.com/7/746.html



3 nhận xét:

  1. I have some comments for your entry:
    - For your 3rd item:
    Firstly, I think the Antithesis is used in this story. For example, "finish to school" vs "go back to school", "start work" vs "retire", "get married" vs "get divorce",....
    Secondly, the other rhetorical device used right there in the first para is Climax. This is the process that almost people undergo: getting married, having child, raising kids, dealing with teenagers' problems....
    However, the story is easy to understand and it can help cheer up people and let them know how to appreciate their life.

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  2. Hi Lan Anh, you have a significant story. i appreciate it. but I think in the message's item1 it is exactly is a punishment for cheater, not a warn: cheating must be harming yourself. :)

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  3. In my oppinion the message of your item 1 is :" if you play with fire, one day you will be burned"
    Acctually i dont really get the point of this picture, i think it is a little bit vague and there is not a really moral lesson in it...

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